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제목 My wedding dresses 1 등록일 2020-12-08
내용 I wore three types of dresses for my wedding photo.
The first of all was a strapless dress of sheer organza and with a fitted bodice. Its skirt shape was a narrowed A line and slim silhouette, so entirely this dress was a modern style.
Also there was no embellished bead or lace on it but I could decorate this dress with a silky topper or halter.
Thr second one was an off thr shoulder dress with softly flared skirt. It had illusion neckline and sparkling tulle. Also embroidery and intricate beading add the detail to the bodice.
담당강사 Heni2 등록일 2020-12-09
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I wore three types of dresses for my wedding photo.
The first (of all) was a strapless dress of sheer organza (and) with a fitted bodice. Its skirt's shape was a narrow A line and slim silhouette, so( entirely) this dress was a modern style.
Also, there was no embellished bead or lace on it,but I could decorate this dress with a silky topper or halter.
The second one was an off the shoulder dress with a softly flared skirt. It had AN illusion neckline and sparkling tulle. Also, embroidery and intricate beading addED TO the detail OF the bodice.

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