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| 제목 | My wedding dresses 2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-08 |
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| 내용 | Like the first one it could be created different styles with silky and lacy topper. The last one had short sleeves with a mermaid line skirt. Its embroidered and sophisticated bodice and ornate skirt was really gorgeous so honestly I liked it the best. Due to a chapel length train, this dress was much graceful and elegant than any others . |
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| 담당강사 | Heni2 | 등록일 | 2021-10-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Like the first one because different styles could be created with A silky and lacy topper. |
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