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제목 Corona is getting worse in Korea. 등록일 2020-12-08
내용 I spent a hard weekend at home with my children. Because Corona is getting worse in Korea.
I think that the children have to go outside. If they stay at home, they are going to start to run around, scream, drop food, and fight. It couldn’t be worse.
I want to be a good father but it's very difficult.
The solution is that if they don't follow my instructions, I make them study.
Then they calm down a little.
담당강사 Jean 등록일 2020-12-09
첨삭 내용

I spent a hard weekend at home with my children. Because Corona is getting worse in Korea.

I had a diffucult weekend at home with my children. Because Corona virus situation is getting worse in Korea.

I think that the children have to go outside. If they stay at home, they are going to start to run around,

I think that the children have to go outside. If they stay at home, they are going to start to run around, scream, they will waste food, and fight or it could be worse than that.

I want to be a good father but it's very difficult.

I want to be a good father, but it's very difficult.

The solution is that if they don't follow my instructions, I make them study.

The solution is that if they don't follow my instructions, I make them study.

Then they calm down a little.

Then, they calm down a little.

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Dear Andy,

Congratulations! You did well. I did a minor corrections. Keep it up!

Regards

Jean

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