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제목 Appointment 1,2 등록일 2020-12-09
내용 1. Whenever I make an appointment, I usually check my iphone first. You know, I always have tried to recoord my important schedule on the diary apprication in my iphone. It is really conveinent because it informs me in advance when I have an important schedule. Without an iPhone, I'd probably be crazy.
2. Two weeks ago, I originally planned to have a year-end party this weekend with my corkers.
You see, a year-end party is very common, but you know it is totally different from our normal due to the covid 19. We should cancel the party by the policy of the gov as the cases is obvisouly incle.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2020-12-10
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1. Whenever I make an appointment, I usually check my iPhone first. You know, I always have tried to reco(o)rd my important schedule on the diary appLIcation in my iPhone. It is really convenIent because it informs me in advance when I have an important schedule. Without an iPhone, I'd probably be crazy.
2. Two weeks ago, I originally planned to have a year-end party this weekend with my coWOrkers.
You see, a year-end party is very common, but you know it is totally different from our normal due to the covid 19. We (  should)  MUST cancel the party DUE TO the policy of the gov (as the cases is obvisouly incle) since the cases are obviosly increasing..

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