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제목 Furniture 1 등록일 2020-12-09
내용 I used various furniture in my house from bed to drawer. almost all furnitures i have were purchased when i marriage. I like color and comfortable feeling of furniture. I used to buy ready made goods on online. But when i received furniture, it was different that i thought. After that i only buy furniture at shop. First I see furniture, and buy. I think furniture is expensive. But it's worth the price. Recently i bought a drawer made of hardwood for children. It smelled wood. The owner gave me a discount too. I satisfied and i will purchase furniture at shop when I need.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-09
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I use various types of furniture in my house from beds to dressers. Most of the furniture I have was purchased when I married. I like the color and the comfortable feeling of the furniture. I used to buy ready-made goods online. But when I received the furniture, it was different than I thought. After that, I only buy furniture at the shop. First I see furniture and buy. I think furniture is expensive. But it's worth the price. Recently I bought a dresser was made of hardwood for the children. It smelled of wood. The owner gave me a discount too. I was satisfied and I will purchase furniture at the shop when I need it.

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