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| 제목 | Recycling1, 2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-10 |
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| 내용 | 1. I think the recycling system in Korea is efecetive. I am satisfied with our system because it is free for recycling such as plastics, bottles, and papers. You know, For regualr garbage bags, we have to pay for them. But, I feel it is not too expensive. Only one thing that I don't like regarding our recyling system is that I can recycle once a week, on a specific day. It is a little bit unconvenient. Anyway, I mostly like our recycling system. 2. In my opinon, the most important thing is to protect our nature environment. It's because we have to give clean environment to next generation. | ||
| 담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2020-12-11 |
| 첨삭 내용 | 1. I think the recycling system in Korea is efFec(e)tive. I am satisfied with our system because it is free for recycling such as plastics, bottles, and papers. You know, WE HAVE TO PAY FOR REGULAR garbage bags.. But, I feel it is not too expensive. THERE IS only one thing that I don't like regarding our recyling system WHICH IS that I can recycle JUST once a week, on a specific day. It is a little bit INconvenient. Anyway, I mostly like our recycling system. 2. In my opinon, the most important thing is to protect our ( nature) environment. It's because we have to give A clean environment to THE next generation. |
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