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제목 Appointment3 등록일 2020-12-14
내용 I canceled an appointment with my son last his birthday. Originally, I was to have a dinner at a chinese retaurtant and I made a reservation. But, I couldn't go the restaurant due to a sudden assignment from my boss. I had to work late on the day. I heard that my son was very disappointed on that.I really hated my son being disappointed. So, To make up for this, I came home late, but I ordered chinese food delivery. It was not bad. Also, I gave a birthday gift to him. It was a game package that he really wanted. Fortunately, he was generally satisfied with his birthday
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2021-02-12
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I canceled an appointment with my son last his birthday.

I canceled an appointment during my son's last birthday,

 

Originally, I was to have a dinner at a chinese retaurtant and I made a reservation.

Supposedly, I was to have dinner at a chinese restaurant and made a reservation.

 

But, I couldn't go the restaurant due to a sudden assignment from my boss. I had to work late on the day.

But I couldn't go the restaurant due to a sudden assignment from my boss. I had to work late on that day,

 

I heard that my son was very disappointed on that.I really hated my son being disappointed.

I heard that my son was very disappointed and I hate that feeling.

 

So, To make up for this, I came home late, but I ordered chinese food delivery. It was not bad.

So to make up with him, When I came home after work I ordered chinese food and it wasn't bad.

 

Also, I gave a birthday gift to him. It was a game package that he really wanted.

Also, I gave him a birthday gift. I was a gaming package that he really wanted.

 

Fortunately, he was generally satisfied with his birthday

Fortunately, he was very satisfied with his birthday.

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