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제목 Furniture 3 등록일 2020-12-14
내용 I bought a new furniture 1 years ago. I bought a dresser for my children. Growing my children, their clothes were increased, so we didn't have enough dresser for children's clothes. we searched online store to find cheap dresser. Knowing approximate price in advance, we visited local furniture stores.
In furniture store, we found a dresser that we want. But it was too expensive. During we hesitated, my children ran around the store. Owner looked like worrying furniture and he discounted furniture to end the deal. thanks to,we bought it at a low price. We use it well until now.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-14
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I bought new furniture 1 year ago. I bought a dresser for my children. As my children have gotten older,  their wardrobe has increased, so we didn't have enough dressers for their clothes. We searched online stores to find a cheap dresser. Knowing the approximate price in advance, we visited local furniture stores.
In the furniture store, we found a dresser we wanted. But it was too expensive. So we hesitated to buy it while my children ran around the store. The owner looked as if he was worried about the furniture so he discounted the price to end the deal. Thankfully, we bought it at a low price and we still use it to this day.

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