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제목 plogging 2 등록일 2020-12-14
내용 The second plogging was done in Ubooreum in Jeju which is my hometown. It was good news that there were not much trash during climbing. However, when we were on the way back to the home with ordinary talks, we could not focus on our conversation and distracted by the by the trash.
It was good news that there were not much trash during climbing. However, when we were on the way back to the home with ordinary talks, we could not focus on our conversation and distracted by the trash on the side of road. We had no choice to disregard the fact in front of us, so we started picking trash up.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2020-12-15
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The second plogging was done in Ubooreum in Jeju which is my hometown.

It was good news that there were not much trash during climbing.

However, when we were on the way back home with ordinary conversation, we could not focus and got distracted by the by the trash on the side of road.

We could not disregard what was  in front of us, so we started picking up the trash.

 

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