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| 제목 | 2020-12-16 (1) | 등록일 | 2020-12-16 |
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| 내용 | When I had conversations with a few JEINS employees concerning the personnel matter, I felt they were neither smart nor intellectual. They even couldn't logically write in Korean. I wondered how they could be hired and could take important positions. I soon found they were all Jeju locals. They were beneficiaries of nepotism. However, when I worked with Jeju locals who had passed the government official exams, I never felt the same. I climbed Mt. Halla many times. Its height is about 2 km. When I got to near the summit, I could see rope railings. One day, after it snowed, I climbed it again. |
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| 담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-16 |
| 첨삭 내용 | When I had conversations with a few JEINS employees concerning the personnel matter, I felt they were neither smart nor intellectual. They even couldn't logically write in Korean. I wondered how they could be hired and could take important positions. I soon found they were all Jeju locals. They were beneficiaries of nepotism. However, when I worked with Jeju locals who had passed the government official exams, I never felt the same. |
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