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| 제목 | 2020-12-16 (2) | 등록일 | 2020-12-16 |
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| 내용 | When I got to near the summit, I couldn't see any rope railing. I wondered where they had gone. I soon found they were three to four meters below my feet. I realized I was walking on a thick snowpack. I am going to climb it again tomorrow, if the weather allows. | ||
| 담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-16 |
| 첨삭 내용 | **When I got to near the summit, I couldn't see any rope railing. I wondered where they had gone. I soon found they were three to four meters below my feet. I realized I was walking on a thick snowpack. I am going to climb it again tomorrow, if the weather allows.**** |
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