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| 제목 | Beach 1 | 등록일 | 2020-12-16 |
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| 내용 | When i go to the beach, i usually wear a rash guard. Top is a long rash guard which covering arms, pants is a rash guard to cover knee. when i traveled to saipan 2 years ago, while swimming i didn't wear top cloth. After i suffered from burn of skin. Inspite of putting suncream, my skin totally got sunburn. It was maintained for 2 months. advantage of rash guard is comfortable in the water. It doesn't sock up the sea water and it dries easily. After that i wear a rash guard when i go to the beach. | ||
| 담당강사 | Danielle2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-17 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Whenever I go to the beach, I usually wear a rash guard. The top is a long rash guard that covers arms with pants to cover the knees. When I traveled to Saipan 2 years ago, while swimming I didn't wear top cloth. In spite of putting on suncream, my skin totally got a sunburn. It was maintained for 2 months. The advantage of the rash guard is that it's comfortable in the water. It doesn't soak up the seawater and it dries easily. After that, I wore a rash guard whenever i go to the beach. |
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