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제목 1990s-01 등록일 2020-12-17
내용 Two Koreas 1990s: The death of Kim Il-sung and the 'sunshine policy’

The collapse of the Soviet Union and the East European communist states in the early 1990s left North Korea completely isolated both politically and economically.
Furthemore, the death of Kim Il-sung in July 1994, caused an overall crisis in North Korean society.
Although Kim Il-sung’s death was cause enough for a crisis in its regime, North Korea was to face even graver problems.
The so-called ‘grueling march’, which began in 1995, refers to an overall crisis in North Korean society due to a dire economic depression.
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Excellent job, love the word usage and description in this paragraph. Just remember to check grammar.

Two Koreas 1990s: The death of Kim Il-Sung and the 'Sunshine Policy’ (Always remember to capitalize names and titles of policies or laws.)

The collapse of the Soviet Union and the East European communist states in the early 1990s left North Korea completely isolated both politically and economically.
Furthemore, the death of Kim Il-sung in July 1994, caused an overall crisis in North Korean society.
Although Kim Il-sung’s death was cause enough for a crisis in its regime, North Korea was to face even graver problems.
The so-called ‘grueling march’, which began in 1995, refers to an overall crisis in North Korean society due to a dire economic depression.

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