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내용 Kim was the first opposition candidate to win the presidential election, ending 50 years of conservative rule.
His vision for the Korean people led him to pursue a policy of engagement toward North Korea.
This was reciprocated and amplified by the ‘sunshine policy’ pursued by Kim Dae-jung’s administration.
After then, the 1998 visit to North Korea by Hyundai President Jung Ju-young and his gift of 500 head of cattle, as well as the inception of the Mt. Geumgang tour program, changed the paradigm of North-South relations.
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Kim was the first opposition candidate to win the presidential election, ending 50 years of conservative rule.
His vision for the Korean people led him to pursue a policy of engagement toward North Korea.
This was reciprocated and amplified by the ‘Sunshine Policy’ pursued by Kim Dae-jung’s administration.
After then that, the 1998 visit to North Korea by Hyundai President Jung Ju-young and his gift of 500 head of cattle, as well as the inception of the Mt. Geumgang tour program, changed the paradigm of North-South relations.

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