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제목 plogging 3 등록일 2020-12-17
내용 After I moved to Jinju, it was the first plogging in this city. In order to clean the place around me and feel fulfilled on my birthday, I did plogging in Gajwa Mountain! The most trash accounted for on mountain was cigarette butts while I climbed. Can you imagine the danger of abandoned cigarette butts? Like forest fire!! Besides cigarette butts, I was able to pick up plastic bottles, candy vinyl and Styrofoam. I felt once again that this activity has the positive effect on myself as well as on many people around me such as those who looked at me and said thank you.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2020-12-17
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After I moved to Jinju, it was the first plogging in this city.

In order to clean the place around me and feel fulfilled on my birthday, I did plogging in Gajwa Mountain!

The most trash accounted for on the mountain was cigarette butts while I climbed.

Can you imagine the danger of abandoned cigarette butts?

Like forest fire!!

Besides cigarette butts, I was able to pick up plastic bottles, candy vinyl and Styrofoam.

I felt once again that this activity has the positive effect on myself as well as on many people around me such as those who looked at me and said thank you.

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