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제목 Opic answer 3 thank you 등록일 2020-12-18
내용 This year The coronavirus made it very difficult to do activities outside So I decided to start camping. actually I am not interested in outdoor sports I am homeboy. virus changed me. Atfirst I saw a man selling the whole camping gears and I try to buy them because I thought it would be very annoying to buy camping gears one by one. but now I know that how fun it is to prepare every equipment one by one. I bought a table chairs lanterns and so on.
담당강사 Alison2 등록일 2020-12-18
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This year The coronavirus made it very difficult to do activities outside So I decided to start camping. actually I am not interested in outdoor sports I am homeboy. virus changed me. Atfirst I saw a man selling the whole camping gears and I try to buy them because I thought it would be very annoying to buy camping gears one by one. but now I know that how fun it is to prepare every equipment one by one. I bought a table chairs lanterns and so on.

 

This year, the coronavirus situation made it very difficult for us to enjoy outdoor activities. So, I decided to start camping. Actually, I haven't been interested in outdoor sports because I'm a HOMEBODY at heart. The virus changed all that. At first, I saw a man selling complete camping gear sets. I was thinking of buying one because I thought it would be more efficient than buying everything piece by piece. But now, I know how fun it is to shop for each piece individually. So far, I've bought a tabel, chairs, lanterns, and many other pieces.

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