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제목 | Opic answer 4 thank you | 등록일 | 2020-12-18 |
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내용 | After arriving at the camping site I got all my camping years out of the car and iwe set up the tent. I'm hammering the spikes to secure the tent so that tent doesn't blow away. after arranging everything I grill beef it is really delicious. sometimes I grill sweet potato on the Camp Fire. cut them in half and put them butter in there, wrap them in hoil put them in the fire And grill several minutes it is fantastic taste so I was addicted to camping |
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담당강사 | Alison2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-18 |
첨삭 내용 | After arriving at the camping site I got all my camping years out of the car and iwe set up the tent. I'm hammering the spikes to secure the tent so that tent doesn't blow away. after arranging everything I grill beef it is really delicious. sometimes I grill sweet potato on the Camp Fire.
After arriving at a camping site, I getall my gear out of the car and set up the tent. I secure the tent by hammering spikes into the ground. That way, the tent won't blow away. After arranging everything, I like to grill some beef. It's really delicious. Sometimes, I'll grill sweet potatoes directly on the campfire. I cut them in half, put butter on them, wrap them in foil, and then place them on the fire. I grill them fo rseveral minutes. The taste is fantastic!! So now, I'm addicted to camping! ** I think they migh tput limits on how many times you can use this system, Mia. If that happens, you can always contact me directly at ..................... maultsby@usc.edu |