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제목 Beach 2 등록일 2020-12-18
내용 This year, i went to ulsan to congratulate a friend's wedding. End of wedding, I and my friends went to a beach to watch the sea. While watching the sea, my stress was relieved. We walked the beach for a long time and drank a fresh sea air. After we went to sushi restaurant to eat lunch. We could eat a fresh sushi at a cheap price and we looked around a fish market. I bought dried fish and conch. I came back home. It was hard to drive, but it was worth to watch the sea.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-18
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This year, I went to Ulsan to congratulate a friend's wedding. When the wedding was over, I and my friends went to a beach to watch the sea. While watching the sea, my stress was relieved. We walked on the beach for a long time and drank in the fresh sea air. After we went to a sushi restaurant to eat lunch. We could eat fresh sushi at a cheap price and we looked around a fish market. I bought dried fish and conch and drove home. It was hard to drive, but it was worth watching the sea.

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