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제목 Beach 3 등록일 2020-12-23
내용 I visit most often gyeongpodae beach. The beach is located in 강원도. It is far from my house about 3 hours by car. I think gyeong is the most beautiful beach in my country. since i like swim, gyeongpodae is best place. It has wave and i can surfing. The beach is moderately deep and cleaned sea. i can go to beach near my house, but i don't satisfied because the beach is shallow and turbid sea. In addition, When i saw a sea at dust, my stress relieved. That is why i prefer going to gyeongpodae beach.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-23
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I visit most often Gyeongpodae beach. The beach is located in 강원도. It is far from my house about 3 hours by car. I think Gyeong is the most beautiful beach in my country. since I like to swim, Gyeongpodae is the best place. It has waves and I can surf. The beach is a moderately deep and clean sea. I can go to the beach near my house, but I don't satisfy because the beach has a shallow and turbid sea. In addition, When I see the sea at dusk, my stress relieved. That is why I prefer going to Gyeongpodae beach.

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