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제목 2020-12-28 (1) 등록일 2020-12-27
내용 I found there were no broken parts in my body
I found there was no broken part in my body
I found that nothing was broken in my body

I saw a somewhat/rather high speed bump up ahead.

After auditing JEINS and its three schools, the audit department of JDC sent their decisions to JEINS. Then, JEINS delivered them to the schools. I received the audit decision for the network project from the Bursar. According to it, the IT manager and I must receive a written warning, and the IT Director must receive a formal reprimand.
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I found there were no broken parts in my body
I found there was no broken part in my body
I found that nothing was broken in my body

I saw a somewhat/rather high speed bump up ahead.

After auditing JEINS and its three schools, the audit department of JDC sent their decisions to JEINS. Then, JEINS delivered them to the schools. I received the audit decision for the network project from the Bursar. According to it, the IT manager and I must receive a written warning, and the IT Director must receive a formal reprimand.**

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