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제목 Hotels in Korea 2 등록일 2020-12-30
내용 When my wife had a baby, we went to the hotel to take a self picture for congratulating babies born in advance. Although Many people took a picture In the photo studio, but we prepared It by our self. We prepared babies clothes, shoes and stand for camera. We took a picture in the hotel room. It was Excited and happy. I didn't forget this memory. Unfortunately We didn't took a picture when my wife had a second baby. In the future, i want to take a family photo.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-30
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When my wife had a baby, we went to the hotel to take a self-picture for congratulating babies born in advance. Although many people took a picture In the photo studio, we prepared It by our self. We prepared the baby's clothes, shoes, and a stand for the camera. We took a picture in the hotel room. I was excited and happy. I didn't forget this memory. Unfortunately, We didn't take a picture when my wife had a second baby. In the future, I want to take a family photo.

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