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제목 | Hotels in Korea 3 | 등록일 | 2021-01-04 |
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내용 | When i went a device training for experiment, i got a chance to eat lunch the restaurant in a hotel for free. Ordinarily i don't go to the restaurant In a hotel . I think it's too expensive. I was amazed divers kind of food. Because the type of food are too much, in spite of eating one piece of food, it made me full. They also served beer for free. I ate food more than usual, i was satisfied but i don't go to the restaurant for my money | ||
담당강사 | Sarah2 | 등록일 | 2021-01-05 |
첨삭 내용 | When i went a device training for experiment, i got a chance to eat lunch the restaurant in a hotel for free. Ordinarily i don't go to the restaurant In a hotel . I think it's too expensive. I was amazed divers kind of food. Because the type of food are too much, in spite of eating one piece of food, it made me full. They also served beer for free. I ate food more than usual, i was satisfied but i don't go to the restaurant for my money.
thanks for writing.your story is AWESOME!!! .here is the edited correct version = I attended a "device training for experiments" workshop in a fancy hotel..our buffet lunch was provided for free which was great because I never eat at expensive hotel resturnats. but this time it was for FREE so I am never one to turn down a free meal and I was hungry so I decided to go and when I walked in the restruant and saw the amazing variety of freshly prepared beautiful dishes are displayed on a buffet for anybody to eat, I was actualy shocked and my mouth started watering. I wanted to try everything and drink all the beer I could, but as soon as I started eating my belly got so full,I couldnt eat another bite even though I tried! what an experience! BRAVO !!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!
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