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제목 Recycling 1 등록일 2021-01-08
내용 In my apartment, people saperate plastic, paper, glass, Vinyl, can and so on. This recyclable waste can be thrown away in weekends. Also when i took out a coffee, some cafe gave me paper straw instead of plastic. My country effort to reduce plastic and encourage to recycle. Some companies recycled plastic and changed it to cloth. Recycling is the best way to protect nature. Plastic can't decay. We should start recycling right now.
담당강사 Sarah2 등록일 2021-01-11
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In my apartment, people separate plastic, paper, glass, Vinyl, metal cans, straws etc. This recyclable waste can be thrown away on weekends. Korea is determined  to reduce plastic and encourage ALL PEOPLE to recycle. Some companies recycled plastic and changed it to cloth. Recycling is the proper way to deal with the many billions of tons people and compamies produce every day. Plastic can't decay. it is destroying our earth, air, oceans,  wildlife and humans. We should recycle  and teach others how to properl;y dispose  of our overwhelming  rising tide of garbage before climate change destroys us all.

 

greart article ! good job! Sarah :)

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