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내용 When I managed the security system, I didn't need each person's ID card to modify their access to doors. I think it still works that way/in that way.

I got feedback/a feedback from him.
I got feedback/feedbacks from the staff, students, and parents.

I submitted my 2nd complaint to JEINS on November 20, 2020. According to the rules, JEINS should have made a decision about it by January 6, 2021. On January 7, I sent an email to JEINS, notifying it that the deadline expired. I also asked it what was the decision. JEINS didn't reply. I sent the same email again on January 11.
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When I managed the security system, I didn't need each person's ID card to modify their access to doors. I think it still works that way/in that way.

I got feedback/a feedback from him.
I got feedback/feedbacks from the staff, students, and parents.

I submitted my 2nd complaint to JEINS on November 20, 2020. According to the rules, JEINS should have made a decision about it by January 6, 2021. On January 7, I sent an email to JEINS, notifying it that the deadline expired. I also asked it what was the decision. JEINS didn't reply. I sent the same email again on January 11.**

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