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내용 tried to stop him by explaining something. The sergeant finally grabbed the comrade by the collar, and started hitting. The comrade fought back. I tried to stop the fight, but I couldn't stop both at the same time. They both were relentless, so I gave up stopping the fight. The sergeant was badly beaten. At that time, it was normal that seniors bullied juniors without proper reasons in the S. Korean military. I was surprised because a junior beat a senior. That evening, a senior sergeant of my platoon called me, and asked what happened. I told him what I saw and heard.
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tried to stop him by explaining something. The sergeant finally grabbed the comrade by the collar, and started hitting. The comrade fought back. I tried to stop the fight, but I couldn't stop both at the same time. They both were relentless, so I gave up stopping the fight. The sergeant was badly beaten. At that time, it was normal that seniors bullied juniors without proper reasons in the S. Korean military. I was surprised because a junior beat a senior. That evening, a senior sergeant of my platoon called me, and asked what happened. I told him what I saw and heard. **

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