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제목 | Reading newspapers 1 | 등록일 | 2021-01-20 |
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내용 | I read newspapers every morning before i go to work. I could read news on online in mobile phone. It gives me all sorts of information and knowledge easily. Just open the phone, and click. Thanks to internet, i easily contact various global news. Nowadays i interested in stock, reading newspapers is very useful to find a chance to invest. Furthermore it made me more smart and talkative. When i talk to my colleague, i am always full of topics and ideas. It's not difficult to carry on a conversation. This benefits make me read newspapers everyday not to quit. | ||
담당강사 | Sarah2 | 등록일 | 2021-01-28 |
첨삭 내용 | I like to read newspapers every morning before i start my day. I enjoy reading the news on my smart phone. It gives me the opportunity to learn all sorts of information including current national and international news quickly. I open the phone, click and read. Thanks to the internet, i can easily access a variety of global news sites. Nowadays, since i am interested in stocks. I read the international business news which is useful in finding excellent investment opportunities. Furthermore, consistently reading and thinking first -thing every morning plus being able to speak, read and write English well has helped me to become knowledgeable and confident enough to talk more openly with my friends and colleagues. i am find it interesting to have good conversations on different topics and ideas. It's fun to communcate with other human beings where ever they are in the world! I plan to continue to my postive morning habit of reading morning news. why not consider trying it yourself? I am ready to talk with you! ****final edit from Sarah late wednesday night/ i shorterned some of the longer complex sentences..see if this helps you Yeong U. I like to read newspapers every morning before i start my day. I enjoy reading the news on my smart phone. It gives me the opportunity to learn all sorts of information including current, national and international news quickly. I open my smart phone, click and read. Thanks to the internet, i can easily access a variety of global news sites. Nowadays, since i am interested in stocks, I read the international business news, which is useful for finding excellent investment opportunities. i feel consistently reading and thinking first -thing every morning is good for my mental well being. I know speaking, reading and writing using English has helped me become more knowledgeable. I am confident when I talk openly with my friends and colleagues. I find life is interesting when we can share good conversations on different topics and ideas. It's fun to communicate with other human beings around world! I plan to continue to my positive morning habit of reading the morning news. Why not consider trying it yourself? I would enjoy talking with you!
AWESOME WORK Yeong U. hope you like my edits..we can talk about them next class. thanks for your continued deciation to improving your English speaking /communcation skills.. Sarah
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