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| 제목 | 2000s-1 | 등록일 | 2021-01-28 |
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| 내용 | In 2000, South and North Korea wrote history with their first Inter-Korean Summit since the division. During the summit, which was held in Pyeongyang from June 13 to 15, President Kim Dae-jung and Chairman of the National Defense Commission Kim Jong Il adopted the June 15 North–South Joint Declaration. In the declaration, the two leaders affirmed their commitment to joint efforts to reunite family members that were separated by the division and expand economic, social, and cultural exchange efforts. | ||
| 담당강사 | Ashley2 | 등록일 | 2021-01-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | In 2000, South and North Korea wrote history with their first Inter-Korean Summit since the division. During the summit, which was held in Pyeongyang from June 13 to 15, President Kim Dae-jung and Chairman of the National Defense Commission Kim Jong Il adopted the June 15 North–South Joint Declaration. In the declaration, the two leaders affirmed their commitment to joint efforts to reunite family members that were separated by the division and expand economic, social, and cultural exchange efforts.
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