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내용 Meanwhile, South Korean President Roh Moo-hyun visited Pyongyang and held a summit with his North Korean counterpart Kim Jong-il, from October 2 to 4, 2007.

Roh walked into North Korea across the Military Demarcation Line(MDL) on October 2 as the first South Korean head of state to do so.

Roh and Kim held a summit on October 3 and adopted a declaration on the advancement of inter-Korean relations, peace and prosperity the following day.
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Meanwhile, South Korean President Roh Moo-hyun visited Pyongyang and held a summit with his North Korean counterpart Kim Jong-il, from October 2 to 4, 2007.

Roh walked into North Korea across the Military Demarcation Line(MDL) on October 2 as the first South Korean head of state to do so.

Roh and Kim held a summit on October 3 and adopted a declaration on the advancement of inter-Korean relations, peace and prosperity the following day.

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