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제목 20 minutes are so short???? 등록일 2021-02-10
내용 I'd like to say I am match short hair length than long.
My close friends always say short hair is batter than long with me. And my family are 5, but we have same residential area on resident registration. We live saperate but we have same adress. it is little complex ???? anyway it is ok!
Holiday start! I am so happy.
Happy new year christie, I hope this new year will be the best of your life.

Bye!
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2021-03-04
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I'd like to say short hair length looks better on me..

My close friends always say short hair is better than long hair for me.

And my family are 5, but we  live in the same residential area. 

We live separately but we have the same adress.

Does it sound complicated?   anyway it is ok!

The Holiday has started !   I am so happy.

Happy new year Christie, I hope this new year will be the best of your life.

Bye!

Happy new year to you,  Kim! 

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