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제목 Camping 1 등록일 2021-02-10
내용 Before covid 19, my family often went to park for Playing with my children near the daecheong dam. We can go there about 30 minutes by car from my home. I think it is the geography advantage . People can bring pet, and run around with pet and children as much as you like. We could play with bubbles. I blew it and my children ran and followed it. After that we went to daecheng dam . In summer when we were near the dam, wind is cool and environment is beautiful. After my children went to park and played , they fell a sleep. The body was tired and i want to rest in weekends, but my children
담당강사 Sarah2 등록일 2021-02-12
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Before covid 19, my family often went to the park near the Daecheong dam. It only takes  30 minutes by car from my home. I think it is a geographical  advantage  to live close to dam. People can bring pets. Everyone seems to enjoy running  and playing  with their pets and children 7 days a week! the kids love it when we would play with bubbles. I would blow  bubbles and my children ran and followed the bubbles laughing  and clapping with joy.. it is great to go in all four seasons! we can be outside and enjoy the fresh air walking, running and being together outside. Especially  In hot and humid summers when we  are near the dam, the wind is cooling  and everything is beautiful and green. After we get back home, we have to bathe and feed the childrern before they fall asleep as they are so worn out from being outside in the fresh air for hours that they  almost fall asleep while  eating!  I am  tired too and i want to rest on weekends, but my children are my first priortiy  and i love being their dad and  spending  quailty time with them. I can rest when I am 100!

 

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