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| 제목 | Camping 3 | 등록일 | 2021-02-17 |
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| 내용 | Before i am going to camping, first of all i make a reservation to accommodate. I usually make a reservation about 6 months ago Before starting the camping. It's advantageous to book good room and also can be discounted. Second of all I write everything i need in the camping in my note. While preparing supplies for camping, it's pressure to me. As seeing note, i don't miss to prepare camping supplies. And i prepare extra clothes for unexpected situations. I usually bring gochujang and dried laver. They are useful when i didn't have side dishes. Try to make a list when you prepare camping | ||
| 담당강사 | Sarah2 | 등록일 | 2021-02-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Before we can go camping,we must 1st make reservations for our camp site. I usually make reservations about 6 months in advance which take s some planning. It's advantageous to book the best campgrounds early as we can get a good disocunt. Second I write a list of everything we will need from start to finish. While preparing supplies for camping, it can be stressfull getting everything ready to go, so i like to be organized.. when i consult my list it helps to ensure we dont; forget anything. we have learned to always pack extra clothes for unexpected situations. Being korean, we aways bring gochujang and dried laver. They add flavor to our food! I urge anyone wanting to go camping, try it, you will make unforgettable memories and have the best experiences with family andf friends but to keep the stress level low, follow my advice and make a list when you prepare to go camping. you will enjoy your camping trip more when you are well preapared and everyone will be thankul to have such a good time! BRAVO!! WELL DONE!! HIGH FIVE! |
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