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제목 | Lesson1 | 등록일 | 2021-02-18 |
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내용 | First of all, The benefits of GMO to human is increasing the quantity of the food. Now, the human population is rapidly increased. Actually, food is getting short of. GMO can help the problem. Another benefit is nothing. In my opinion, The losses of The GMO food is not good for health. When the GMO Crops are caltivated, a huge amount of camical into it. It affects to human’s health deadly. In addition, we don’t have lots of information about it. And it destroyes ecosystem. It’s not natural process for harvesting. And Lesson2. I dont have an experience about any Circus Thanks Vanessa |
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담당강사 | Vanessa2 | 등록일 | 2021-02-18 |
첨삭 내용 | First of all, The benefits of GMO to human is increasing the quantity of the food. Now, the human population is rapidly increased. Actually, food is getting short of. GMO can help the problem. Another benefit is nothing.
In my own opinion, there are more disadvantanges of GMO that can risk our health. GMO crops are filled with harmful chemicals that can be fatal to human health. In addition, we still lack information about how GMO really affects humans and environment. Nevertheless, GMO do not go through the natural process.
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