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| 제목 | Lesson3 | 등록일 | 2021-02-19 |
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| 내용 | In the lesson 1, i studied about wine industry which is affected by climate changes. The main impact is that The climate changes fatally diminishes the food resources. In other word, decreases in products. Thank Vanessa |
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| 담당강사 | Vanessa2 | 등록일 | 2021-02-19 |
| 첨삭 내용 | In the lesson 1, i studied about wine industry which is affected by climate changes. The main impact is that The climate changes fatally diminishes the food resources. In other word, decreases in products.
Actually, food is getting short of. GMO can help the problem.- This is what you wrote .... It looked like food is getting short of GMO.... - I thought what you meant was decreased production of GMO. I thought the (.) was a typo. So what you meant here is this: Due to the shortage of food, GMO can create more food options. |
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