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제목 Photography 1 등록일 2021-02-24
내용 I didn't interested taking pictures long time ago. When i dated with my wife, we went other regions. While we travel , we want to take pictures for keeping moment there. So we bought a little expensive camera. Since then i Bring camera when I go to regions. Nowadays i usually take pictures for my children. When my children are playing and laughing , i couldn't help but press the shutter constantly. After a while seeing pictures again makes me happy. Advantage of photographs is function of memory. I would like to not forget memory . So i saw the photographs from time to time.
담당강사 Sarah2 등록일 2021-02-25
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I wasn't  interested in taking pictures  a long time ago. When i was dating my wife, we  would go to other regions. While we traveled , we decided we wanted to take pictures for memories. So we bought an expensive little camera. Since then I  bring our camera everywhere we go. Nowadays i usually take pictures of my children. When my children are playing and laughing , i couldn't help but press the shutter constantly. After a while seeing pictures again makes me happy. Advantage of photographs is function of memory. I would like to not forget memory . So i saw the photographs from time to time.

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