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제목 | Last sunday 1 | 등록일 | 2021-03-02 |
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내용 | Last sunday, I played golf with my friends who had worked together for twenty years. The place was so far from seoul, so we had to hurry up. I was happy to play with them because we hadn't met for a long time by the pandemic. But during the game, the oldest guy of us made me tired. His complains was continued for all playng times. He repeated that the place was too much long distance from home and tee off time was too late to have dinner. He had wanted to play golf, so youngest coworker tried to many golf club and got a reservation. to be continue. . . . |
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담당강사 | Tristan1 | 등록일 | 2021-03-05 |
첨삭 내용 | Last sunday, I played golf with my friends who **I **have been **working together *with for twenty years. The place was so far from Seoul, so we had to hurry up ***to get there. I was happy to play with them because we hadn't met **each other for a long time **because of the pandemic. But during the game, the oldest guy of us made me tired **very quick. His ***complaints continued **during *the whole time we **played. He repeated that the place was too long distance from **his home and tee off time was too late **for dinner. He had wanted to play golf, so **the youngest coworker **in our group tried to make a reservation at several golf clubs and *he finally got one. |