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제목 Last sunday 2 등록일 2021-03-02
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The oldest agreed that time and place. We play golf together once per two months. Almost every time, he unsatisfy to his golf score and make various reason to the result. Maybe he think it's other friend's fault. I've tried not to be like him, but my worry about that has been increasing as I'm older and older. I hope I would be a friendly old man to my two son and younger friends for a long time.
담당강사 Tristan1 등록일 2021-03-05
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The oldest agreed *with the time and place. We **played golf together once **every two months. Almost every time, he **is unsatisfied **with his golf score and *he makes up too many reasons *for **losing. Maybe he think it's *our other friend's fault. I try my best to not to be like him, but my worry *is that **the older and older **I get the more I complain like him. I hope *to be a friendly old man to my two **sons and younger friends for a long time.

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