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제목 Photography 2 등록일 2021-03-05
내용 When i was a military man, fortunately my unit were selected to go Hawaii for rimpack training. Our ship was training in the sea, and docked in Hawaii. We could freely travel for a day. I took a picture with film's camera all around of Hawaii. I was amazing everything, i didn't believe i was here. I want to show off my friends and family about Hawaii so i took a picture every where. Whenever i see photographs, it was funny . In the photographs, there is laughing man in Hawaii. Short haired and old fashioned man was standing with big smile.⁰ If i have a chance i bring my family in Hawai
담당강사 Luciana2 등록일 2021-03-08
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When I was a military man, fortunately, my unit went to Hawaii for rimpack training. Our ship was training in the sea and docked in Hawaii. We could freely travel for a day. I took a picture with film's camera all around of Hawaii. I was amazing everything, I didn't believe I was here. I want to show off my friends and family about Hawaii so I took a picture every where I wenr. Whenever I look over old  photographs, it makes me laugh . In the photographs, there is a  laughing man in Hawaii. Short haired and old fashioned man was standing with big smile.⁰ When I have a chance, I bring my family in Hawai!!

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