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| 제목 | What I'm interested in recently. | 등록일 | 2021-03-09 |
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| 내용 | These days, I many clothes attention. Because it's spring soon. So, I will buy flower long dress and lovely outer. Already i'm happy. And i love K-POP idol. Blackpink, Straykids. So i dance blackpink's lovesick and strakids's backdoor. They had tallent. So my eyes is funny during see them. Finally, i want to buy tellephone case. I many to buy in world. |
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| 담당강사 | mandela2usa | 등록일 | 2021-03-10 |
| 첨삭 내용 | These days, I am paying attention to my clothes because it's spring soon. So, I will buy a long flower dress and a lovely outer. I'm already happy. I love K-POP idols, Blackpink and Straykids. So I dance to blackpink's lovesick and strakids's backdoor. They are tallented. My eyes are happy to see them. Finally, i want to buy a tellephone case. I want to buy many things in world. |
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