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제목 Please. Check if it fits the grammar. 등록일 2021-03-10
내용 1.To be recognized Entresto No.1 HFtreatment for customers and patients.
2.To become a recognized team within Novartis, in which team members inspires each other and make superior results and processes.
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1.To be recognized Entresto No.1 HFtreatment for customers and patients.
2.To become a recognized team within Novartis, in which team members inspires each other and make superior results and processes.

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1. To make customers recognized Entresto as number one HF Treatment for customers and patients.

To become a recognized team within Novartis, in which team members inspires each other and make superor results and processes.

Good job!  Keep up the good work!

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