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제목 Tasks in office 2 등록일 2021-03-23
내용 Current job is my first permanent job. When i was university student, i worked in e mart near my house during vacation. In those days, it is simpke work. For example if the product sold, i filled it in a show case. It's simple work but my body was hard. I feel time passed slowly and the pay was small. Current job is quality control in pharmaceutical company. This job is hard but i think more freely and more paid. Almost all work, i sit in front of computer , but time passed faster. I am not bored everyday. At first i was hard but i worked here for a long time about 10 years and i know my
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Current job is my first long term job. When i was university student, I worked in e mart near my house during vacation. In those days, it is simpke work. For example if the product sold, I filled it in a show case. It's simple work but my body was hard. I feel time passed slowly and the pay was small. Current job is quality control in pharmaceutical company. This job is hard but I gave freedom to think and more paid. Almost all work, I sit in front of computer , but time passed faster. I am not bored everyday. At first I was hard but i worked here for a long time about 10 years and I know my Job well

 

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