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제목 Mistake 등록일 2021-03-25
내용 I've been busy for a month. Last Friday, I finished my busy work. So I decided to go on a trip with my elder brother. We had not got a trip together for 30 years. My brother could rent a friend's apartment for free. It's on a famous beach 3 hours away from Seoul. We stayed there for three days. I was so relaxed since Sunday. But when I arrived home I realized that I missed many things I had to do last week. The biggest mistake was missing the deadline of applying for next month phone English classes. I should retire in June, so I don't know if I can apply for the education of May.
담당강사 Tristan1 등록일 2021-06-01
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I've been busy for a month. Last Friday, I finished my work, *so I decided to go on a trip with my elder brother. We **have not **gone on a trip together for 30 years. My brother **rented a friend's apartment for free. It's on a famous beach 3 hours away from Seoul. We stayed there for three days. I **have been so relaxed since Sunday. But when I arrived home I realized that I missed *so many things **that I had to do last week. The biggest mistake was missing the deadline **for applying for next month phone English classes. I should retire in June, so I don't know if I can apply for **this  education *in May.

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