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제목 Overseas business trip 1 등록일 2021-03-29
내용 My first business trip was visiting api company in China for audit. I didn't know well about audit and it was planning to go senior. Suddenly senior went to other education and i was told to go audit in China. I've never gone to China before, i expected this trip. I accompanied with qa manager who is familiar with audit. We planed to visit 2 regions and departed in Shanghai. Everything was surprising. Additionally company in China served us well. We ate delicious and expensive foods and liquor. The las t day we traveled in Shanghai and took a ship for seeing a night view. It was amazing
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My first business trip was visiting api company in China for audit. I didn't know well about audit and it was planning to go senior. Suddenly senior went to other education and i was told to go audit in China. I've never gone to China before, i expected this trip. I accompanied with qa manager who is familiar with audit. We planed to visit 2 regions and departed in Shanghai. Everything was surprising. Additionally company in China served us well. We ate delicious and expensive foods and liquor. The las t day we traveled in Shanghai and took a ship for seeing a night view. It was amazing

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