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제목 Hi Good afternoon~ 등록일 2021-03-31
내용 yesterday we talked about 미얀마(Miyanma),

미얀마 military government is very scared and terrible.

40 years ago, Korean also had big fight military government problem. We called 5.18 광주 pro-democracy movement.

So many people died to gun and violence for military. I can't understand for monopoly of power. Thay are not the God.

People should live for their own life. We remember sacrifice them.

Nowdays KOREA is fast developing country. We are pray for them every year at 5.18.

미얀마 people should look for a better life. They need help.
담당강사 Henry2 등록일 2021-04-05
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Yesterday, we talked about Myanmar.
Military government is very scary and terrible.

40 years ago, Korean also had a big fight with the military government.. We called 5.18 (Pro-Democracy Movement).
Many people died because of violence between the military. I can't understand the monopoly of power. Thay are not the God.

People should live their own lives. We sacrificed for them.
Nowdays, Korea is a fast developing country. We pray for them every year on "5.18 Day".

People should look for better lives. They need help.

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