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제목 relationship with different people 등록일 2021-04-06
내용 Relationship with differeent types of people help people to develop better. Different types of people have their own strength and weakness. Having relationships with friends who have different strengths is likely to make the people cover their weakness. For example, my sister was picky and sensetive person. People around her were tired because she wanted to fix the things that she didn’t like. However, she had chaged positively after meeting his so peaceful husband. He always tried to accept everythings but soetimes be indiffernt. They could realize their own characteristics.
담당강사 Jem2 등록일 2021-04-06
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Relationships with differeent types of people can help people someone to develop better. Different Various types of people have their own strengths and weaknesses. Having relationships with friends who have different strengths is are likely to make the people cover their weaknesses. For example, my sister was picky and sensetive sensitive person. People around her were tired bothered because she wanted to fix the things that she didn’t like. However, she evenutually had changed for the better positively after meeting his so her peaceful husband. He always tried to accept everythings but soetimes sometimes he would be indifferent. They could realize their own characteristics.

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