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제목 | Work out regularly | 등록일 | 2021-04-12 |
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내용 | There are a number of benefits of working out regularly. First, it can reduce the stress at workplaces and schools because they mostly spend all of their time doing it. Second, Jogging has an effective way to lose weight which burns heaps of calories. It can also manage to lower the possibility of heart disease. Finally, people do not easily come down with cold because of improving the immune system. | ||
담당강사 | Latoya1 | 등록일 | 2021-04-12 |
첨삭 내용 | There are a number of benefits of working out regularly. First, it can reduce the stress at workplaces and schools because they mostly spend all of their time doing it. Second, jogging is an effective way to lose weight which burns heaps of calories and can also help to lower the possibility of heart disease. Finally, people who jog do not easily come down with a cold because jogging improves the immune system. |