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| 제목 | Why I want to be a nurse | 등록일 | 2021-04-20 |
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| 내용 | The reason why I want to be a nurse is that I want to provide mental and physical stability near patients. This is because it is important to treat patients, and also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . So I will create a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check patient’s condition frequently so that patients can recover their health as soon as possible. | ||
| 담당강사 | Trixie | 등록일 | 2021-04-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | The reason why I want to be a nurse is that I want to provide mental and physical stability near patients. This is because it is important to treat patients, and also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . So I will create a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check patient’s condition frequently so that patients can recover their health as soon as possible.
============================================== The reason why I want to become a nurse is that I want to provide a mental and physical stability to the patients. This is because it is important to treat patients, and also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . I will create a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check the patient’s condition frequently so that the patients can recover as soon as possible.
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