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| 제목 | I want to change the second sentence like this | 등록일 | 2021-04-20 |
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| 내용 | The reason why I want to become a nurse is that I want to provide a mental and physical stability to the patients. This is because it is important not only treat patients, but also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . So I will create a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check the patient’s condition frequently so that the patients can recover as soon as possible. | ||
| 담당강사 | Trixie | 등록일 | 2021-04-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | The reason why I want to become a nurse is that I want to provide a mental and physical stability to the patients. This is because it is important not only treat patients, but also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . So I will create a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check the patient’s condition frequently so that the patients can recover as soon as possible.
======================= The reason why I want to become a nurse is that I want to provide a mental and physical stability to the patients. This is because it is important not only to treat patients, but also it is necessary to make them recover quickly . So I will create (or make) a pleasant environment and provide mental stability and I will check the patient’s condition frequently so that the patients can recover as soon as possible. (you can also use the word "quickly") .
this is already good
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