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제목 About my work 등록일 2021-04-21
내용 Hello, I work in a company’s history museum and need to write some sentences to explain/speak stuff.

There is the very first building of the company in one corner of the museum and I would like to make people compare the real building in front of them with the old picture showing the building in the past on the wall.

In that case, should I speak like below?

Please look at the picture above(on the wall) which shows when the building was actually used. You can compare the building in front of you with the picture. You can also look around the building through the window.

Thanks!
Dayou
담당강사 George2 등록일 2021-12-15
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Hello, I work in my company’s history museum and need to write some sentences to explain/speak stuff.

There is the very first building of the company in one corner of the museum and I would like to make people compare the real building in front of them with the old picture showing the building in the past on the wall.

In that case, should I speak like below?

Please (direct your attention to)  the picture above(on the wall) which shows when the building that was actually used. You can compare the building with the picture, as you can also see the the building through the window.

Thanks!
Dayou

 

This is good!

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