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제목 Today's homework 등록일 2021-04-27
내용 <Completion : to finish doing something>
At monday, I watched that korean actor Yuh-Jung Youn was been winner of Academy awards. Somebody says that she completes a completion of her life, but she will continue on her way.

<Thoroughly : in a delailed and careful way>
To take a rest comfortably in holiday, I must work thoroughly in work time.

1. I had to fill out resume to change my job. Now I succeeded in moving my job.
2. When I got my first job, I didn't know that what can I do for my office. My partner helped me very hard. I still feel thankful for him.
담당강사 cynthia2usa 등록일 2021-04-28
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Hello Wongyu, here are your corrections, welldone!

To take a rest comfortably on holiday, I must work thoroughly during work time.

1. I had to fill out an application (we create a resume) to change jobs. Now I have succeeded in changing my job.
2. When I got my first job, I didn't know what I can do for my office. My partner helped me a lot. I still feel thankful to him.

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