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제목 Writing - Divided Korea 1 등록일 2021-05-25
내용 title : (KOREAN Explains) Why Korea was Divided? | Part.1

To understand the matter why Korea was divided, we first should know the relations between America, England and Russia.
In the 1880s, Russia was the biggest rival of England.
By the time the British Empire took the one fourth of land in the world, and Russia was going to down to the Asia.
Because, as you know, Russia is very cold, so they wanted to have a port of Pusan(Korea) which does not freeze.
Knowing that Russia was going down, England supported Japan to stop Russia spreading, and Japan made a war against Russia.
담당강사 cynthia2usa 등록일 2021-05-25
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title : (KOREAN Explains) Why Korea was Divided? | Part.1

To understand the matter of why Korea was divided, we first should know the relationship between America, England, and Russia.
In the 1880s, Russia was the biggest rival of England.
By the time the British Empire took over one-fourth of the world's land, and Russia migrated down to Asia (especially Korea).
Because, as you know, Russia is a very cold country, so they wanted to have a port in  Pusan (Korea) that does not freeze.
Knowing that Russia was going down, England supported Japan to stop Russia from spreading, and Japan went to war against Russia.

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